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Wenzao Ursuline University of Languages 4-year College Mid-term Exam
65
for the Spring Semester of 2024-2025: Fundamental English Writing
Name: Rufina
Class: UEIB
Score:
No.: 1113200111
Writing 100%
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Topic: Effects of AI
Write an essay explaining artificial intelligence (AI) and how it has affected our lives.
Support your thesis/controlling idea with meaningful examples, reasons, and/or information,
Organize your essay in a clear and logical manner, including an introduction three body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
Use transitional strategies to connect your ideas, sentences, and paragraphs.
Write at least 250 words.
Give your title of the essay.
Marking criteria: content 30%, organization 30%, grammar and vocabulary 30%, format 10%
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Total number of words: 268
(Title) Effect of Al
Artifica intelligence is rapidly transforming how we live and work.
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From voice assistants to advanced advantage medical diagnostics, Al can -7adv. brings humans
efficenting
works
life to more higher level. One major of Al is more effective it can
boose our time, make a decision, solve complex problems and detect diseases
before doctor But Al also make concerns , for example, While Al take new
repetivity
role, it
can do work like market job and manual job These job are
easy and Prepert over and over again, not only these normal jobs, but
also some professional jobs such as , doctorS, teachers, computer designers
Because when patients go to hospital they need to write their private
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information. The biggest problem is that's very killed the time and those
patient
paramedics don't have enough time to wait every patients so Al can help
to remember every patients) where their pain, when did the last time paitents
come to hospital even who are they How a days Nowadays Al is very strong,
you can tell Al to do anything or help you with your homework (Part) At at the
15 same time people used Al need to be more carefully. Al can help us to
do several things to make our life better, Improve environment save more time
to finish our work. On the other hand, some bad people use Al to do something
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disgusting , for example, they hurt teenager on the internet and sell those
20 videos on the Telegram whichs internet police officer can't follow (you) IP side.
So when this world become more convincent, we should be more carefull and
protect our private information at the same time.
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