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LANG1402 Chap.3 Reporting and Referencing What You Read

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Reporting and Referencing What You Read

The verb is a claim about the source

When you write about what somebody else has said, the verb you choose is not neutral packaging. It tells a reader what that writer was doing and how you are reading them.

The lesson groups the common verbs by the action they describe: stating or presenting information, making a claim or argument, suggesting or proposing, showing or demonstrating through research, and acknowledging or conceding. Learning the groups rather than the list is what lets you choose quickly.

The one verb to avoid is says, because every source says something and the useful question is whether it reports, argues, concedes or demonstrates.

Precision cuts both ways: writing that an author demonstrates a point the source only suggests hands your reader a claim your own reference list can refute.

Five patterns that do the attributing

A verb needs a sentence built around it, and the lesson supplies five patterns that cover almost everything a literature review requires. Author plus verb plus a that-clause is the workhorse.

According to plus the source suits an organisation better than an individual. The article or study plus verb plus a noun phrase compresses a finding. As the author verbs signals that you are aligning with a source rather than merely citing it. And a passive construction foregrounds the reported idea, which is worth using sparingly because it hides the agent.

All five share one property: the reader knows where the idea came from before the sentence ends.

Reported speech, and the exception that matters

Relaying what a source wrote usually involves three changes: the tense steps back, pronouns shift to the third person, and words anchored to the original moment are rewritten. The exception is the one students get wrong.

A definition, a standing statistic or a continuing trend keeps the present tense, because the step back applies to what was said rather than to what is still true. Backshifting a live fact quietly tells your reader that it has since changed. The lesson then turns to source types and to where reliable information actually lives, landing on a formulation worth memorising: an answer from a search engine or an assistant is a lead.

Check the fact itself, track the publication it came from down through the library, and cite that.

In this chapter

What this chapter covers

  • 01

    Five functional groups of reporting verb

  • 02

    Why says carries no information, and why demonstrates can carry too much

  • 03

    The five attribution patterns, and when each one fits

  • 04

    Tense, pronouns and time words in reported speech

  • 05

    The facts that keep the present tense, and why it matters

  • 06

    Four source types matched to the question each answers best

  • 07

    Search engines, assistants and the library in the right order

  • 08

    Signalling phrase plus reporting verb plus reported idea

Worked example · free

Build one attributed paragraph from two sources

Q [6 marks]. AskSia-authored practice. You have read two short texts on campus waste. One is a university news item reporting that a reuse scheme collected just over a tonne of donated items in a single cycle. The other is an opinion column arguing that such schemes mainly relieve guilt while leaving purchasing habits untouched. Write one paragraph of four to six sentences that summarises each, names a connection, uses at least three different reporting verbs and attributes every idea. The marks shown are an AskSia study allocation and are not the University's marking scheme.
  • 2Summarise each text in your own words with a suitable verb.
  • 2Vary the verbs so that the relationship to each source is visible.
  • 2Close with your own sentence saying what the two jointly establish.
A paragraph that works reports the news item neutrally, since it is presenting figures, then uses acknowledges for the column's concession that such schemes divert usable goods from landfill and argues for its contested claim that visible success can make consumption feel solved. The closing sentence is the writer's own: read together, the two texts suggest that a redistribution scheme is evidence about disposal rather than about demand, since neither measures what participants bought afterwards. Three different verbs carry three different relationships, every sentence names its source, and the final sentence does what no summary can do by itself.
Sia tip — Assemble each sentence in the order signalling phrase, reporting verb, reported idea. Starting from the idea leaves you with nowhere natural to put the source.
Glossary

Key terms

Reporting Verb
The verb that carries a source's idea into your sentence and states what the source was doing with it, such as reports, argues, concedes or demonstrates.
Signalling Phrase
The part of a sentence that names where an idea came from, whether an author and year, an organisation or the document itself.
Reported Speech
The grammar used to relay what somebody wrote, normally shifting tense back, moving pronouns to the third person and rewriting words tied to the original moment.
Reference Work
A source such as an encyclopedia or dictionary, best used for a reliable overview or definition at the start of a search rather than as evidence in a review.
Organisational Report
A publication from a recognised body, useful for authoritative statistics and stated policy positions that a journal article may not carry.
Library Guide
A curated route into the databases and search tools for a subject, which is where a lead found elsewhere is turned into a citable source.
Attribution
The practice of showing which idea belongs to which source, so that a reader can always tell where a source stops and your own reasoning begins.
FAQ

Reporting and Referencing What You Read FAQ

Why is says discouraged in academic writing?

Because it tells a reader nothing. Every source says something, so the word carries no information about whether the author was presenting a fact, defending a contested position, conceding ground or reporting a result. Swapping in a precise verb can change a paragraph from a list into an argument, because three sources that argue are in dispute while three that report merely agree about facts.

When should a reported idea keep the present tense?

Whenever it is still true. Definitions, standing statistics and continuing trends stay in the present, because the step back in tense applies to the act of saying rather than to the state of the world. Pushing a live fact into the past implies to your reader that it has since changed, which is a claim you have not made and cannot support.

Can I cite an answer from a search engine or an assistant?

No. The lesson's formulation is that such an answer is a lead rather than a reference: useful for finding keywords or for a rough picture of a field, and never citable in itself. Check the fact, then track down the publication behind it through the library, and let that publication be what enters your report, because a plausible-looking citation you have not opened may not exist.

Study strategy

Assessment move

Take one source you already intend to use and write the same finding five times, once with each attribution pattern. It takes ten minutes and it removes the commonest monotony in a literature review, which is three paragraphs that all begin with an author's surname.

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