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LANG1402 Chap.10 Writing the Discussion and Conclusion

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Writing the Discussion and Conclusion

Where reporting stops and interpreting starts

The lesson treats the discussion as the part of the report that everything else exists to make possible, and it names the shift precisely. You stop reporting that one source found this and another found that, and start saying what the set of them adds up to.

The section answers the question you opened with, puts your reasoning where a marker can see it, and reaches outward to what the finding implies for practice, for policy or for further study. The sorting exercise that opens the lesson defines it as much by exclusion as by content.

Of eight candidate elements, a statement of the question and background context belong in the introduction, a summary of each source and a note of where sources agree belong in the literature review, an acknowledgement of limits and a final restatement belong in the conclusion, and only interpretation and recommendations belong in the discussion itself.

What a discussion paragraph is made of

The three sample paragraphs the lesson analyses each do a different job.

One sets out the points of agreement and the points of divergence, treating a difference of scale or emphasis as a difference of scale rather than as a contradiction. One answers the guiding question directly with an interpretation that reframes the topic. One sets out implications in three named directions.

The language features named alongside them are analytical reporting verbs, hedging, cohesive devices and evaluative language, and much of that list is about linking rather than about content, because a discussion builds an argument rather than reporting results.

Four moves and one prohibition

The conclusion restates the guiding question and purpose, summarises the key finding rather than listing findings, reflects on a limitation of a small scale study, and identifies a direction for further work.

No new sources or evidence appear, and a reader notices immediately because the citation has no reference behind it in the review. Limitations are usually written as an apology when they should be written as a boundary: naming what the evidence shares tells a reader exactly how far the finding travels.

In this chapter

What this chapter covers

  • 01

    Eight candidate elements routed to four sections

  • 02

    Opening a paragraph with a reading rather than a fact

  • 03

    Differences of scale and emphasis, explained rather than stated

  • 04

    Analytical verbs, hedges, cohesive devices and evaluative language

  • 05

    Implications for practice, policy and further research

  • 06

    The four moves of a conclusion and the one prohibition

  • 07

    Limitations written as boundaries rather than as apologies

  • 08

    APA patterns and the check that runs in both directions

Worked example · free

Turn a list of findings into the opening of a discussion

Q [6 marks]. AskSia-authored practice. A draft discussion opens: Ng (2025) found a participation rate of 61 per cent. Lau (2023) found 34 per cent. Chan (2024) found that home habits do not transfer to shared halls. Rewrite the opening so that it does what a discussion is for, and explain the change. The marks shown are an AskSia study allocation and are not the University's marking scheme.
  • 2Replace the first sentence with an interpretation.
  • 2Use the same three findings as evidence for it.
  • 2Name the relationship between them.
The rewrite opens on the pattern: taken together the sources converge on a single explanation for a wide spread of reported rates, namely that participation appears to track the effort a system demands rather than the attitudes students hold. The two divergent rates then appear as evidence for that reading, with the note that the campuses differ chiefly in where collection points sit, and the third finding is placed alongside them rather than against them. Nothing new was added and no number moved. What changed is the first sentence, which became a reading instead of a fact, and that is what moved the paragraph from the literature review into the discussion.
Sia tip — If the first sentence of a discussion paragraph names an author, you are still writing the literature review. Open on what the sources jointly show.
Glossary

Key terms

Discussion
The section that interprets the reviewed findings in relation to the guiding question and draws implications, rather than reporting what each source said.
Implication
A consequence the findings point to for practice, for policy or for further research, stated specifically enough that somebody could act on it.
Cohesive Device
A word or phrase such as however, in contrast or taken together, which links ideas across sentences and paragraphs so that a reader can follow an argument.
Evaluative Language
Wording such as significant, limited, robust or preliminary that comments on the strength or importance of a finding rather than restating it.
Limitation
A stated boundary on how far a finding travels, drawn from a feature the evidence actually shares rather than from general modesty about the study's size.
Hanging Indent
The reference list format in which the first line of each entry sits flush left and subsequent lines are indented.
FAQ

Writing the Discussion and Conclusion FAQ

What is the real difference between the literature review and the discussion?

The literature review reports what sources say and shows how they relate. The discussion says what those relationships mean for your question and what follows from them. The quickest test is the opening sentence of each paragraph: a fact about a source belongs in the review, a reading of the evidence belongs in the discussion.

Can I introduce a new source in the conclusion if it is a good one?

No. The published structure allows the conclusion only what has already been discussed, so a source arriving at the end has either been mishandled or does not belong. The two legitimate repairs are to move it into the literature review and integrate it properly, which makes it one of your three, or to cut it.

How should I write the limitation without undermining my own report?

Name a specific feature the evidence shares and say which population or setting the finding may not cover. That hands a reader a boundary and hands you a direction for further research. A general statement that the study was small invites doubt about everything without telling anyone where the finding actually stops.

Study strategy

Assessment move

Run the reference check in both directions and treat it as two separate passes. Reading the text and confirming each citation appears in the list catches omissions; reading the list and confirming each entry is actually cited catches the source you dropped while editing, which is the commoner error and the one that suggests the list was assembled rather than used.

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