AHIS10003 Chap.15 Where Art History Essays Lose Marks
Where Art History Essays Lose Marks
The Subject Guide publishes its own list of thirteen problems that it says frequently occur in undergraduate art history essays, and it is the most directly useful document in the subject and the one students most often skip. Seven of the thirteen are argument or structure problems, three are evidence or referencing problems, two are expression problems and one is a deadline problem.
That distribution is the message: essays here are lost in the planning far more often than in the writing. This chapter sets out all thirteen with the fix for each, counts what the subject's two H1 sample essays actually contain, reads the University grading descriptors as instructions rather than as verdicts, and closes with a six-item pre-submission checklist.
What this chapter covers
- 01
Not answering the question, and why the fix is upstream in the planning
- 02
Clarity, expression and spelling, and the subject's own remedy
- 03
Points that do not relate to the main thesis: a cutting problem
- 04
Over or under the word limit, both treated as equally serious
- 05
Late submission, and the 5% per day penalty
- 06
Insufficient evidence, and what counts as evidence in art history
- 07
Poor or non-authoritative references, and over-reliance on survey texts
- 08
Poor citation, websites, and recording the date you viewed one
- 09
Failure to critically engage, and why agreeing still requires a reason
- 10
Poor structure and poor signposting
- 11
Poor argument, and the courtroom test the subject offers
- 12
Imprecision in evidence and in argumentation
- 13
What two H1 samples actually contain, counted
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The grading bands, and the one word separating the top two
Four named problems in one paragraph, and the repair
- 1Name the imprecision: many interesting colours, very effective and strong mood identify nothing that could be checked.
- 1Name the failure to critically engage: some critics have said attributes a view to nobody and takes no stance on it.
- 1Name the irrelevant point: the sentence about other artists experimenting is general context doing no work here.
- 1Name the missing evidence: four sentences with no visual detail and no source.
- 2Rewrite at the same length with all four repaired.
Key terms
- Signposting
- Letting the reader know where one topic ends and another begins, using paragraphs and opening sentences to break topics up logically.
- Non-authoritative reference
- Journalism, blogs, some websites or promotional material which, unlike peer-reviewed articles and books from reputable publishers, do not draw on evidence-based research.
- Survey text
- A broad overview work. Over-reliance on survey texts, to the exclusion of monographs, reviews and articles, is named by the subject as a cause of superficial essays.
- Imprecision
- Insufficient analysis of the text or artwork to give meaningful support to the argument, or vagueness in the argumentation itself.
Where Art History Essays Lose Marks FAQ
What is the single most common way to lose marks in this subject?
Planning failures that only become visible on the page. Of the thirteen problems the subject names, seven are argument or structure problems: not answering the question, points unrelated to the thesis, poor structure, poor signposting, poor argument, imprecision, and failure to critically engage. Only two are about expression.
How far over the word limit can I go?
The subject FAQ names more than 10% over as the point at which a marking penalty applies, with a higher penalty and a possible grade cap at 25% or more. Both of the subject's H1 sample essays sit just inside that allowance: one states 1,092 words for a 1,000-word task and the other 2,182 for a 2,000-word task. Being under the limit is treated as equally serious as being over it.
What does a strong essay actually contain?
More apparatus than the minimum. The longer of the two sample essays carries eleven bibliography entries against a stated minimum of eight, which puts it above the ten at which the top research band begins, and fifteen numbered figures. The shorter carries four bibliography entries and six figures. Those counts are our own count of the entries in each sample; the word counts are stated by the essays themselves.
What separates an H2A from an H1?
One word in the descriptors. H2A meets all the key assessment criteria and exceeds in some; H1 meets all the key criteria and excels in most. It is the same essay doing more of its criteria very well rather than a different kind of essay, which means an H1 is reached systematically. Work that is also original, exciting or challenging is where the high 80s live.
Exam move
Read the thirteen problems once before you draft anything and once again before you submit, because they are a diagnostic list rather than general advice.
Then build the six-item pre-submission checklist the chapter ends with and run it every time: does the introduction contain an arguable claim, can every paragraph be traced to it, does every general claim have a visible detail under it, is every source introduced by name with your position stated, does every footnote give the exact page, and are you inside the limit with a conclusion that introduces nothing new.
Reading the whole draft aloud once covers expression as well.
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